What a wonderful poem you have there. I really am confused on what you have written, but I do think that it was very creative. The part that I like in your poem is when you said "White light shining bright Shadows seen, that follows me" Keep up the great work Irene, Malo Aupito!
i've just finished reading your poem. What i love about you poem is Mirror Mirror on the wall you always reflect what you see and it really made me kind of the same and i love your poem so much and keep up the poem work on.
Malo e lelei Irene, I really love your poem it's like you've copied it off google but I don't think you did that right. Keep Up the good work.
ReplyDeleteKia Orana, Irene!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem you have there. I really am confused on what you have written, but I do think that it was very creative. The part that I like in your poem is when you said "White light shining bright
Shadows seen, that follows me" Keep up the great work Irene, Malo Aupito!
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Malo e lelei Irene
ReplyDeletei've just finished reading your poem. What i love about you poem is Mirror Mirror on the wall you always reflect what you see and it really made me kind of the same and i love your poem so much and keep up the poem work on.