Hi my name is Ella I live far far away from town with my mother Alice, We moved out far away cause my mum killed my innocent father. We live in a rotten ugly house in the middle of nowhere. My house is surrounded by old trees. We plant veggies out in a little garden we have and hunt for animals for meat to feed ourselves, and sometimes my mum would abuse me. At night I would always think about my father.
One day I went for a walk among the bushes, and a stunning gorgeous big tree was standing right at the front of me, it caught my eyes like if I was dreaming. I walked slowly to the tree and memories of my father would come in mind, I touched the tree the breeze blew by, and I notice something, the smell of the wind…………….
The… the wind smelled like my fathers perfume he wore everyday. The tree was so magical it's like my father lived here or he might be the tree "I thought". I wanted to climb to the top of the tree but it was too late that I needed to go home.
The next morning I went to the garden planted a few veggies and did a little bit of chores, and my mother would go hunting for some deer. After I did all my chores, I ran back to the tree and I slowly walked by it………. And memories of my father will come back, tears would flow down my face and when I touch the tree I would smell my fathers perfume.From now on I would always come and visit the tree, I would sometimes have lunch there or when my mother abuses me that where I run to, it gives me peace. THE TREE WAS MY FATHER…….. I told myself.
Kia ora everyone sorry for stopping there but I only had two days to write the story. Comment below of what you think I would've done to make it more interesting or comment below to what you think the next part will be. I hope you enjoyed it.
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