Poetry ( Language Features)

This week Ive learnt language features, Simile, onomatopoeia, rhyming words, alliteration, and metaphors, I've learnt what they mean and how to use them in writing a song or poems or even a story.

Visiual Art Rubric- Learn(Part 1)

Name Artist: Sandra Fabara ( known as Lady Pink.
The 3 main elements thats been use in this painting is, COLOUR ( as you can see its colourful filled with Blue, Yellow, Pink, Red, Orange and more) SHAPE ( In the artwork there's circles, square, triangle and more) and last of all SPACE( as you look at the painting there space at the top and the layout of the picture has space between them). Lady Pink has focused on empowering women using graffiti ##. Lady pink says it not just a boy club We have a sister thing too.

Facts and opinion of teachers going on strike

Kia ora and greeting to you all, this week we've been focusing on fact and opinions of teachers going on strike. In my own opinion I agree because......... find out in the video below. Thank You!!!!!

The tree where my fathers memory is!!!!!!

Hi my name is Ella I live far far away from town with my mother Alice, We moved out far away cause my mum killed my innocent father. We live in a rotten ugly house in the middle of nowhere. My house is surrounded by old trees. We plant veggies out in a little garden we have and hunt for animals for meat to feed ourselves, and sometimes my mum would abuse me. At night I would always think about my father.

One day I went for a walk among the bushes, and a stunning gorgeous big tree was standing right at the front of me, it caught my eyes like if I was dreaming. I walked slowly to the tree and memories of my father would come in mind, I touched the tree the breeze blew by, and I notice something, the smell of the wind…………….

The… the wind smelled like my fathers perfume he wore everyday. The tree was so magical it's like my father lived here or he might be the tree "I thought". I wanted to climb to the top of the tree but it was too late that I needed to go home.

The next morning I went to the garden planted a few veggies and did a little bit of chores, and my mother would go hunting for some deer. After I did all my chores, I ran back to the tree and I slowly walked by it………. And memories of my father will come back, tears would flow down my face and when I touch the tree I would smell my fathers perfume.From now on I would always come and visit the tree, I would sometimes have lunch there or when my mother abuses me that where I run to, it gives me peace. THE TREE WAS MY FATHER…….. I told myself.

Kia ora everyone sorry for stopping there but I only had two days to write the story. Comment below of what you think I would've done to make it more interesting or comment below to what you think the next part will be. I hope you enjoyed it.

Ratio and Proportions

This week I've learnt how to solve Ratios and Proportion problems, I've found it really challenging cause its my first time solving this kind of question, but I had a lot of fun. ITS GOOD TO LEARN NEW THINGS.

Scarey poem

Slamming and banging

Thinking Im dreaming

Seems like it’s drowning

But its clanging like hanging

Barking and storking

Seems like it’s staring

Bearing that I was caring

Steaming and screaming

Leeming like I’m glowing

Declaring that I'm just dreaming

Writing test

Being a good friend is what people want, and that's what I want too, and I have one of those friends and I love her, she's funny, I trust in her and she’s really cool, if that’s what you want read along, cause in the next 3 paragraph I will give you some ideas of what a good friend means.

My first idea is that being a good friend is always funny. Crack some jokes out to make things fun and funny, like when your friend is feeling sad, being funny can put a smile on or sometimes can change their feelings. For example your friend is sad and angry cause she didn’t have lunch or something to eat, being funny can put a smile on them or can sometimes change their tone. Therefore being a good friend has to be funny to fix unhappy feelings or just for fun.

My second idea is to trust your friend. Trusting a friend is a friend that you can share your secrets with, not  are friend that listens to what you say about others and tells that person, that’s what you call a two face. For example you told your friend that you hated the tough girl in school cause she’s ugly, mean and stupid, and she goes and tell the tough girl what you said, and guess what the tough girls comes after you to give you are hiding, and that’s not a good friend. Trust a friend that not a two face.

My third and last idea is to treat your friend how you want to be treated. How do you want to be treated? I want to be treated nicely respectfully and carefully. If that’s what you want you have to treat your friend how you want to be treated, nicely, respectfully and carefully. If you treat them that way they will treat you back the same, and I know sometimes friends sometimes don’t do that, let me tell,you that's not a trusting cool nice friend. It’s like when you treat you friend nicely respectfully they will treat you the same and isn’t that what you want. By the way treating others the way you want to be treated is a good friend.

There you have it what being a good friend means, is to trust in them (not a two face), To be funny, (crack some funny jokes) and treat them how you want to be treated,( not a friend that you treat nicely and they treat you the opposite), If your friend has all these things in them that’s the best friend in the world, cause I have one of those friends and we’re like sisters, and I really admire that. Thank you for reading and I hope you find a friend like this and and you be like this too.